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A Poem I Wrote. I thought it might be a good idea to try out poetry, i'm not good at flash yet. It's called: Rain

Posted by quickwing23 - July 27th, 2008


Rain

Time stands still
And I don't have free will
To fight
Do anything right
Or break the chains that bind
What I need to find
Is somewhere I don't know
No one will show
Hidden away
I can't find the way

Then it begins to rain
It begins to pour
So fast it floods
The way I was looking for

I am lost
I'll pay any cost
To find the way again
To begin
My way
On such a dreary day
I wish the sun would shine
And intertwine it's hand with mine
Oh! But there it is!
I can't believe this!

Then it begins to rain
It begins to pour
So fast it floods
The way I was looking for

I hoped for more
I'm stricken to the core
Where will I find rest
Will the sun not jest
And make me believe
That I can conceive
The thoughts I need
To heed
So I can find the path
Beyond all this wrath

Then it begins to rain
It begins to pour
So fast it floods
The way I was looking for

I begin to think
And to link
Together the hints
The sun vents
Helping me along
So I can finally belong
And find the place
Using the case
Of the rain
To fight the pain
Just follow
The path the rain made hollow

Then it begins to rain
It begins to pour
So fast it floods
Down the way I was looking for

I smile
As the rain does file
Down the wet
And slick outlet
Down the path the sun
Does rise, and i begin to run
Hoping for the better
Even if it is wetter
Path of life
And no more strife

I found the way
After all of today
I can be content
And never again relent


Comments

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u nva wrote that :)

I did too write it!
And what's up with the sites, i know you have a website, but what do you want?