Original:
Whether Color
Or black and white
I will still
Love you tonight
New:
Any color
Black or white
I don't care
I will still love you tonight
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Untitled and Short (there's a original and a new)
Posted by quickwing23 - July 29th, 2008
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oh wait, u r just 16 and talking about loving 'tonight'. This is just disturbing.
I don't really love someone, but someone could use it for someone they love
Basicsunshine
I like the second one better. simple bu effective. :3
thanks for the comment on my thread btw. :)
quickwing23
Your quite welcome. ANd i like the second one better too. Thanks for looking at my poems in the first place.