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A small Story (any suggestions?)

Posted by quickwing23 - August 14th, 2008


Sunshine filtered in through the window, comforting her the vest it could, and she smiled happily, for the first time since she was very, very young. But I am getting ahead of myself. We start on a rainy day, 523 years ago, on a Monday, in August on the 21st at 8:35 a.m. It would rain all day, still she stumbled down the slippery bricks, that made the road, and the makeshift sidewalk, by passing the crowds and avoiding passing the puddles of wetness that got flung up at her by passing horse carriages. Her cloak billowed out behind her and she pulled her books closer to her chest to keep the rain off of them. She blinked off the rain from her eyelashes and she shivered from the rain streaking down her cloak onwards to her shirt below.

It's all i have. Any suggestions. It's around the time 1485.


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wait wait omg!!!! i might see u in november im gonig to disney world then omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG! I live in zephyrhills, we are like 3 hours away from disney! we have botteled water!

(nice poem thingy)!

its a story, but that's okay. thanks anyways.

awsome bottled water!!@@!!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@ ill be staying in pop centuray hotel