It's an original vampire story. No reflection, no shadow, no heartbeat, drink blood, holy objects hurt, silver hurts, garlic wards off. The vampire hunters have killed Dracula though, and there's only 5 of them, the Helcore family. There are only 7 vampires left on the face of the planet, and only one person can save their existence. That person is Dracula's daughter, that no one has ever meant, and he hid from the world, he let her lead a normal life in the normal world, even when she's not normal. It is modern times, we are in Dracula's castle in Transylvania. I already have the 7 vampires made up and the savior.
And the Helcores ARE the BAD people.
Any ideas of what to do???
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Ideas for a Vampire Story? (Give Ideas)
Posted by quickwing23 - August 22nd, 2008
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I think it would be better if it was spelled Hellcore.
I thought about that too, but it seemed so evil, and its said like that, but spelled funny, thought it'd be different
maybe... we will see
What about having a super weapon?
Like what? and who, the helcores or the last vampires?
The vampires should find it in the castle when someone is really hurt and they are looking for spells to help them heal that person. And it could be either ice or light.
why ice or light? and the savior? or one of the vampires are hurt by silver? cuz i thought that couldn't heal....
they could be hurt by silver but there could be spells that Dracula knows and is someone around the castle. maybe one of the vampires. The ice and light is make them good.
what? dracula is DEAD. D-E-D! dead. and ice and light make them good is no sentence, at least PROPER English so i can read it!
what i meant that Dracula could of left a spell behind
but no one would know how to use it, or may not be powerful enough. our savior happens to be draculas daughter, but cannot control her powers yet so....
agreenexterminator
Well you can always make the bad guy. Thats the biggest thing you need in a story especially one with action.
quickwing23
The helcores ARE the BAD people....