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A Sonnet By Me (What Do You Think?)

Posted by quickwing23 - August 25th, 2008


On Love's day
She took a part
And began to play
With my heart

Then she went
And took half my soul
Now I'm bent
And empty as a bowl

Will I ever be
Full again
Will anyone ever fill me
I doubt I'll ever begin

Then I found you
Washed up all anew

What do you think, it was made for a character in a story me and my best bud are writing. Comments, suggestions, questions???


Comments

Its nice. It sound that someone was sad now is happy.

Yes, exactly, thank you for the comment.

Since when 'Love' became 'She'? oh oh....

btw no need to reply my comment. I was just kidding.

I am so glad you have left this website.

I didn't leave. I just don't come on alot. And why. thx.... NOT