On Love's day
She took a part
And began to play
With my heart
Then she went
And took half my soul
Now I'm bent
And empty as a bowl
Will I ever be
Full again
Will anyone ever fill me
I doubt I'll ever begin
Then I found you
Washed up all anew
What do you think, it was made for a character in a story me and my best bud are writing. Comments, suggestions, questions???
AmyCapula
Its nice. It sound that someone was sad now is happy.
quickwing23
Yes, exactly, thank you for the comment.